The article about Kaintz lead to a discussion that will definitely help the first draft of my paper. One thing i learned is that it is absolutely necessary to make the reader feel intrigued, and sort of involved in a way. In Critical Researcher, they mention this. It claims if you are referring to "mankind" in your essay, first talk about "man." I must first sell my thesis before it becomes a strong argument.
Also, i realized that i need to set limitations for my essay. When referring to "hazing," i must first discuss what EXACTLY it entails. Specifically, what traditions and rituals am i referring to? This ties in with me presenting necessary details for my essay to make sense to the reader. And for a closing paragraph or two, i should mention productive measures one can take in putting an end to "hazardous hazing" in American Colleges. This can include a mention of laws that have taken effect, as well as groups that support putting an end to this tradition as soon as possible. This will serve as a productive closer.
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